On Friday my group looked at all of our media products which
will eventually contribute to an upcoming artist’s music campaign. Whilst
looking at the music video, social media and digipak, we gave feedback on each
draft design. It is important to give feedback so we know how we can better our
campaign and because seeing as each of us is in charge of a certain part of our
campaign, this is a way we can achieve marks for the music video, even though I
am doing the social media, for example.
The first thing we looked at was the album artwork. I gave
the following feedback:
I think the genre is clear because of the crosses and graffiti
used on the front cover, as well as the repetition of the cross on the inside,
crossing out someone’s face. I think for the star image we need to see more of
the faces, seeing as it is an all-female band, so part of the appeal is that
they are female. Also, on the front, the title of the band needs to be a lot
bigger than the title of the album cover because it is all part of selling the
artist not the music.

The use of the band on the front and back shows that it is definitely
a band, not a solo artist. Also using the colour palette of the black, white
and pink reflects the genre of music, and the band’s aesthetic. However, I
think that a few things can be improved. For example, instead of using pictures
from different photoshoots, the album should have pictures from the same
photoshoot to make all of the album cover sides look like they belong together.
Also, similar to the point about covering faces, the title of the album should
not be covering the band’s faces’ because it does not relate to the band’s star
image.
The next thing we looked at was the social media. This is
what me and Bashy collaborated on.
First, we were told our genre was clear to a certain extent,
however it could be clearer. This is possibly due to the fact that there is a
lot of white used in the Instagram where there should be more black and pink. Moving
forward I will be posting more pictures that have these colours in it. I was told
that our star image is clear, as we have pictures of the band together, however
we may need some more pictures of the band with Lottie in the middle to show
she is the lead of the band.
We were told that the picture in which we pretended that the
pictures were disposables was really effective because it looked very cool and ‘edgy,’
as well as this, having a ‘behind the scenes,’ post looks like the band is very
important.
To improve, we could take a big picture and divide it up
into smaller squares, like what some people did last year. We can also add merchandise
to our campaign for example t-shirts, jumpers, as well as tote bags. I took
this idea and thought about how we could release make up, like a red lipstick
or a black nail polish as these are staple products that a girl rock band may
use.
Moving forward we are going to add more darker pictures, make
merch which suits the genre, and try to take more pictures in which Lottie is
seen clearly as the lead.
Finally, we talked about the music video which Adrianna was
doing.
We liked the way that there were cuts between Lottie singing
and then the instruments and back as it looked effective. This is good at conveying
star image because it puts the majority of the focus on Lottie, however it
still includes the band, showing that it is a band, not a solo artist but still
has a predominant lead singer. It also relates to the rest of the campaign, as
we have taken pictures from the shoot days so our social media will relate to
the music video.
To improve I gave to pieces of constructive criticism. One
was changing a cut of the drummer. Instead of putting a mid-shot of Gi and then
a close up, Adrianna should cut to the drum kit in between to make it look
smoother. A second piece of advice I gave her was making the middle section
where she is in her wrecked outfit, a bit faster paced/ using more hand held
shots.